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I don't want to be without you
Ever
To walk this planet alone once more
Is a thought that I cannot bear
My darling,
You lived without me once before
And you can do it again
For you are the strongest individual that I know
What you say is true
I can live without you, but I cannot love
It will not be the same as it one was
I could not miss what I did not know
But now that I have known your love,
Kindness,
Selflessness and
Gentle soul,
It will never be the same
Now that I have known you
I will always love you
Till my dying day
And forever more
For my body may not be immortal
But my soul is
And I will remain with you
Until the end of time
And for all of eternity
Ever
To walk this planet alone once more
Is a thought that I cannot bear
My darling,
You lived without me once before
And you can do it again
For you are the strongest individual that I know
What you say is true
I can live without you, but I cannot love
It will not be the same as it one was
I could not miss what I did not know
But now that I have known your love,
Kindness,
Selflessness and
Gentle soul,
It will never be the same
Now that I have known you
I will always love you
Till my dying day
And forever more
For my body may not be immortal
But my soul is
And I will remain with you
Until the end of time
And for all of eternity
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Monday 14th May, 2012
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This is for #RawEm0tion's current theme, Immortality.
It is from both peoples' point of view, hence the italic text. It is about a person who is going to die before the person she loves, and he is expressing his pain at the thought of living without her. For me this is not a romantic piece, but I tried to write it so that it could be about any kind of love. Please note that the 'your' in the title is the possessive 'your' and not 'you're' as I so commonly find on the internet. ><
Enjoy
Comments are appreciated
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i can relate to this very well..stuck in a similar whirlwind of not being able to let go and in the same time dying from it
can't love can't forget.
very nice poem